Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Remembrance

Winter evening
Soft jacketed evening
They were lost to the world
You mocked them with your song
I walked quietly along.

You mocked them
With your tender song
On that wintry soft jacketed night
Lost to the world
I remembered it differently.

1 comment:

Prachee said...

I just noticed something beautiful in your poem. In the first stanza, 'lost to the world' are the two lovers. In the second stanza, 'lost to the world' is you. :)